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Suspended in atmosphere
Like a water-filled giant holding his breath
            Like a pelican holding water in his beak
The clouds are burnt marshmallows
            Your stomach growls
The sky lights up then goes dark again
            Our city is grey.
The giant heaves a sigh
            The pelican yawns
Soda water falls in spools
forming sticky thread
Connecting the ozone to the concrete
Water crashes around
            two girls in white
They join the others –
Many run and duck
Others are birds
            Spreading their wings
To accept soaking of feathers
            and fingertips.
©2007-2009 ~patiencexnovirtue
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I love rainy days.

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